Reviews for At the Edge of the Grasslands, A Hollow

Reviews For: At the Edge of the Grasslands, A Hollow

rust phoenix 2006-11-04 ch 1,	abuseCool metaphors, the last line was my favorite. The imagery is amazing.
jennilyn.rose 2006-10-22 ch 1,	abuseWow. I really love this. The imagery is great and every line fits so well. Great job =).
brokenaura 2006-10-12 ch 1,	abuseExcellent! The imagery and metaphors throughout the entire poem made perfect sense and fit so well. I love it when I can see myself in someone else's words. applause
Imperia 2006-10-08 ch 1,	abusewow, i really enjoyed reading this and i can't wait to read more. Very interesting style and i relly like the ending. great write and thank you for reviewing me.
Camilleta 2006-10-07 ch 1,	abuseI relate to every line of this, just about. You should write a book or something.. =)
Enigmatic Margaret 2006-10-06 ch 1,	abuseI like how the subject in this poem had an epiphany and decided to go back. You choice of vocab was interesting and it really gave the poem an epic feel. Nice job
The Intelligent Designer 2006-10-04 ch 1,	abuse"And I have chosen the practical over what will make me whole" I love that line. It's sometimes what you have to do, but you always regret it afterwords.The message of the poem is one of pain, and your whole poem was a metaphor for an expierience; that's totally awesome. Cool.
BearHeart 2006-10-02 ch 1,	abuseI especially liked the ending.
Forever Forbidden 2006-10-01 ch 1,	abuseNice. It related so much to what happened to me...
Sk8tR-BunnY 2006-09-30 ch 1,	abuseAnother graceful poem. I love your writing and how personally you put yourself in it. What makes beautiful words like these, is how clearly you can imagine them through human eyes. Keep at your talent-writing down your soul.
Samana 2006-09-29 ch 1,	abuseinteresting, very well written, very personal, not your best, but close, better than my stuff, keep it up, peace

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