I really enjoyed the theme of this poem. It's definately true that people are moer attractive when they look and act natural, not attempting to conform to any stereotype. It's interesting to note that in Roman times, during the Renaissance, and other such time periods, the women considered to be most beautiful often had a little plumpness to them. It was considered a sign of healthiness and wealth. Societal standards for outer beauty change, but inner beauty will always be in demand. ^_~

I like it a lot. Your rhythm is nice. I'm all for true beauty (even though I look pretty fake myself, I find that sort of girl sexy). Good work.

The sexiest girl has a brain and a good heart...no autographs, please...j/k.I like this poem and I really needed to read it today...Sometimes I wonder why we live in a world that seems to be full of Desperate Stepford Housewives. It can get nauseating. But, thanks for the reality check.Cheers,Colleen

Wonderful message! More guys should definatley realize things like this. Well written too, I liked this poem. Keep writing.

Hm, I admit. I don't like it. Not the way you write, of course! Just the topic and stuff. People should worry about themselves. Keep writing.

~Anna~

wow! i love this!

i have felt this way about somebody too... and i can relate fully to the desciptions..

i love it.

keep writing!

liz

Though the message is a great one, it's a little cliche. A lot cliche.

Still, you've got a grip on rhyme, even if this is not as original as I would like to see it.

I'm blonde, but I definitely agree with you that a healthy, natural body image is important. So, maybe if this is somehting you want to say again in a poem, try and experiment with it a little more.

I love this poem. It's wonderful and the message inside is so true. If people would just look at the beauty within, they would see that the true beautiful people are the ones right in front of you.

Love it.

~dragonzz~

she's a phenomenal woman! read that btw, it's by maya angelou. haha. nice work. its a fun read.:)