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Reviews For: In This Sanctuary
rogueninja 2009-11-05 . chapter 1
Very nice. I know, not a "well rounded critique", but I have real trouble criticizing poetry unless there's something wrong grammatically.
Ivory Willow 2006-10-24 . chapter 1
That's exactly how I feel when I'm lost in my imagination.
Cesalie Chase 2006-10-19 . chapter 1
This...is...incredible!

A wonder I hadn't seen it before! Where have I been? (Or, rather, where have YOU been? Locked in a tower? Stranded on a desert island? I'll have you know that I endured "blist'ring winds and scorching deserts--I climbed to the highest-"

Okay, that's enough.

Seriously, this poem is amazing. The last stanza, especially--it's exactly how I feel when I long to just pour my thoughts out on paper. Sometimes I just wish I could do it all the time! But then, of course, it wouldn't be special--and, chances are, it would no longer be to glorify God.

This is seriously awesome. Keep the faith, girl! Good to have you back :)

~"Cesalie" :P
Haunted-dreams05 2006-10-08 . chapter 1
Writing is a great refuge. I love my own little word that is made with pen and paper. Great poem. I'm adding it to my favorite lists.
Winter's Light 2006-09-30 . chapter 1
Sometime I feel like doing that, but I'd get lost. XD

Awesome poem.
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