Reviews for Just Want to Hold Her in My Hand

Reviews For: Just Want to Hold Her in My Hand

sunday night sky
2006-10-13
ch 1,

abuseI found this quite crude, but strangely intriguing. not at all what i was expecting. i sort of liked it! keep writing :D

PS. I would read one of your stories but they are SO long! I don't have time! I will eventually, but not right now :P

felicia13
2006-10-04
ch 1,

abuseUnexpected. I wasn't think it would go there, but it did.

I found it quite vulgar, which isn't always a bad thing, but it was just ... distasteful here.

BUT, there were parts I loved. "And she is the seductress of my soul." Powerful. It was completely ruined by the line after, but ... what can you do?

Yeah. I really don't like it much. No offense to you or anything. It think it's a taste ... one which I don't have, apparently.

Thanks for the review, though. Yay brokendream21!! YAY!

Felicia.

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