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| Midnight Star Lights 2006-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautifully done! I really enjoyed reading it. 10/10! Best of Wishes |
| QuixoticQuetzal 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this one. It's very well written. I really liked the title. It made me smile because we all fall down sometimes, but it's best to just laugh it off. |
| Sakura Taking 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThe title to this poem is very captivating. The poem itself is very amusing, and it made me smile. The wording and descriptions are truly brilliant. Well done! |
| sunday night sky 2006-10-13 ch 1, | abusei like the title of this piece, it caught my attention! well worded, i really enjoyed reading it. The only bit I didnt like is the phrase 'head's meat'. I don't know why :S But the last line is great :D keep writing |
| brokendreams21 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseSurprisingly, this poem made me smile. I don't know if it was meant to be, but I was slightly amused. This was smartly written and I really liked it. Good job! |