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Reviews For: Smile and Show Your Broken Teeth

Midnight Star Lights
2006-12-08
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautifully done! I really enjoyed reading it. 10/10!


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QuixoticQuetzal
2006-12-02
ch 1,
abuseI enjoyed this one. It's very well written. I really liked the title. It made me smile because we all fall down sometimes, but it's best to just laugh it off.
Sakura Taking
2006-10-22
ch 1,
abuseThe title to this poem is very captivating. The poem itself is very amusing, and it made me smile. The wording and descriptions are truly brilliant. Well done!
sunday night sky
2006-10-13
ch 1,
abusei like the title of this piece, it caught my attention! well worded, i really enjoyed reading it. The only bit I didnt like is the phrase 'head's meat'. I don't know why :S But the last line is great :D keep writing
brokendreams21
2006-09-30
ch 1,
abuseSurprisingly, this poem made me smile. I don't know if it was meant to be, but I was slightly amused. This was smartly written and I really liked it. Good job!
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