well expressed emotions. this line was my personal favourite 'I didn’t burn your photographs because I always want to remember', reminds me alot of my thoughts for someone well done

keep writing

I really like this piece - it put a smile on my face. I love the rhetorical questions. The last one, especially. Great poem :D

Well, this is a very interesting topic to pursue. This isn't much of a typical pretty-illusion poem, and it may not be as poetic as I prefer it to be. I can gather from it that whomever is narrating is 'breaking free' in some way and proving someone wrong or telling someone that they are better than someone else. Hm. Tres tres interesting. It's different, but I still like it. Good job!

Thanks for the reviews. They were quite vindicative. (Wow. I feel as though I can't spell today. Umm...I hope that's the context in which you use the word.) They were appreciated. Thanks again!

Great piece! *applauds*, keep writing!

Anna _