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| Carmel March 2007-06-28 ch 1,  | abuseThat was absolutely wonderful :) Good job on this. ~carm~ |
| we-were-sumn-more 2006-10-10 ch 1, | abusehey such a sad first chapter..my grandma passed away a few months ago i cant say i felt that empty because i never got to really know her (she was always sickly and lived in another continent)..but i bet my dad felt that emptiness...ok wait!this is suppose to be a "review"!sorry!it'll be interesting to see how lisa copes up with her pa's death...update soon!!p.s. cud u pls check out the story i've started working on?i dunno..i dont usually write fiction and this is my first so i'd really apprici8 feedback!=D-DEE |