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Awsome poem i new here check out my first poem

Aww, this poem is so sad, but it's really good. Keep up the good work.

So sad and sweet! You should fix the grammar and spelling, because the mistakes take away from the beauty of the poem.

Very realistic. I particularly like "The doctors

and the shrinks

They say it’s a disease

That you can’t control it sometimes

Bullshit"

One thing, "Oh, its could go on forever," sounds like there's a typo in there somewhere, or something.

Aw... I know how this is. At such a young age, it is really hard to go through. And I think you captured that, really well. The voice had a sense of innocence to it, that gave it all the more meaning. I enjoyed this. Thank you for the review.

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Oh...hiatus...thes tory behind it is so sad!i hop ethis wasnt based on actual experience..that would be horrible!great imagery, strong emotions, another great piece!haha-DEE

Wow, very strong emotions, very dark. It's good how you described a situation so raw and painful in poetry. Very good.