Reviews for Your Sickness - FictionPress.com

Erma Buckles 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseSo sad and sweet! You should fix the grammar and spelling, because the mistakes take away from the beauty of the poem.
bfcSUCKS 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abuseVery realistic. I particularly like "The doctors and the shrinks They say it’s a disease That you can’t control it sometimes **" One thing, "Oh, its could go on forever," sounds like there's a typo in there somewhere, or something.
Tipped 2006-12-16 ch 1,	abuseAw... I know how this is. At such a young age, it is really hard to go through. And I think you captured that, really well. The voice had a sense of innocence to it, that gave it all the more meaning. I enjoyed this. Thank you for the review. -Tipped
we-were-sumn-more 2006-10-04 ch 1,	abuseOh...hiatus......thes tory behind it is so sad!i hop ethis wasnt based on actual experience..that would be horrible!great imagery, strong emotions, another great piece!haha-DEE
An-Author-At-Heart 2006-09-30 ch 1,	abuseWow, very strong emotions, very dark. It's good how you described a situation so raw and painful in poetry. Very good.