Reviews for Through The Ether

Kohlomere 2006-10-09 ch 3,	abuseHm...pretty darn good. For a while there I didn't really follow where you were going with all the description of the civilization. Wakeman seems like a very interesting character, in fact, he's my favorite so far. Well, there was just one little typo. But good job, E.
Keira Kentai 2006-10-02 ch 2,	abuseNice! Thanks for the tip on my story and I made sure that I did what I could.(no spoilers!) Anyway, your story. LOVED IT! Even though it's the first chapter with a prologue to it, it's awesome! Update soon. ~The Last Guardian
Kohlomere 2006-10-01 ch 2,	abuseHey, great job!Well, aside from one small typo in The Seventh Circle of Destiny-is "largewr" supposed to be "larger"?- your mechanics are terrific. You used a lot of good action verbs, I don't think I saw more than three in each posting. In high school English courses the teachers tell you to show instead of tell, right? Well, I thought that perhaps the conversation between Adria and Layton was a little to telling. I hope that last comment made sense. Your story really grasped my attention. Keep up the good work,E.