I really like does make me think a little bit and often my thinking goes off into a depression about death but I did really like that.

Very nicely written. I loved the lines, "For surely your life must be glorious when you never have to be alone". Wonderful. Write more.

This was /gorgeous/, darling, and I can't understand why you've put this under romance. So now I'm going to go and obsess over it for days and days and it will eventually end up pissing me off and then I'll start yelling at my computer for not giving me all the answers to life's many questions.

So thank you, darling, you've doomed me.

Alice

I find this very fascinating that you've put this under romance. It's really making me think! This is a pretty poem, I like it lots. Great job, you write really well! Keep it up!

Anna _