Writing always makes me feel better,too. Needless to say, I've been writing a lot lately. xP

I only noticed one mistake, where you had 'time' in the wrong tense - it should've been 'times.'

The ending was the happy kind I like (well, bittersweet suits me better), and you definitely had readers baying for this James' blood ('readers' being me.)

I was pleasantly surprised to find one of my crappier novels had a fan!

Alexis