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first-casualty-of-war
2007-01-22
ch 1,
abuseThis was a very exciting piece, and very well written. I could relate to some of it and I'm sure many people who play sports can, and that made it even more enjoyable. Sweet read and good job =)
YJanZ-Providence
2006-10-08
ch 1,
abuseGood story, you capture the feel of winning a race very well, it's interesting. lol, the total word count is 8.

BTW, if you get the chance, read my story, Angel's Halo 1: Devil's Rising and drop a review. Much appreciated!

See ya!

aka Mitternacht
Goblin Hunter
2006-10-05
ch 1,
abusenice story.
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