This was a very exciting piece, and very well written. I could relate to some of it and I'm sure many people who play sports can, and that made it even more enjoyable. Sweet read and good job =)

Good story, you capture the feel of winning a race very well, it's interesting. lol, the total word count is 8.

BTW, if you get the chance, read my story, Angel's Halo 1: Devil's Rising and drop a review. Much appreciated!

See ya!

aka Mitternacht

nice story.