Reviews for One of his Lies - FictionPress.com

The Un-great-ful 2006-09-30 ch 1,	Good, I think i've reviewed quite a few of your poems if I remember correctly, they are very similar in their style. You're not a bad poet, have you ever tried free verse (non rhyming) You might be good at that as well. Alan.
Princess-anna57 2006-09-30 ch 1,	"Every time I saw a child smile/I’d break down and die." - I HEART this bit. Amazing. Well written piece. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^