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Shadow Whirlwind 2006-09-30 . chapter 1
Nicely written. Loved the rhyming scheme. Keep it up!
The Un-great-ful 2006-09-30 . chapter 1
Yeah, I understand, make it, hate it, it reminds me of when I used to construct things out of lego when I was a kid (whoa flashback!) I'd spend hours making something and then smash it to ** in about two minutes.

Really constructive.

Anyway, nice poem

Alan.
poemkitten7 2006-09-30 . chapter 1
Great poem! I can definitely relate to this feeling sometimes. Keep up the awesome work. =D ~Sara
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