I love this! Your characters are so original and creative. I have completely fallen in love with Fae. If ever I get a boyfriend, I want one like him.

I think that, despite Fae's eccentricities, both characters are very realistic. The situation is believable, too. Awesome story!

oh WOW. I really liked that.
I also really don't know exactly how to explain what i loved about it but... I dont know. my brain is slightly fried.

So, um... I liked that a LOT.

-Cboxed

That was sweet... I think... But you have to remember to give a seperate paragraph for every new charater that speaks.

...To be honest, I don't know what to make of this. The narration is very well done. I couldn't stop reading. At the same time, I wasn't sure if some of the things that happened to Polly were supposed to be perfectly terrible or just plain terrible. While the ending is bittersweet, it seems a little out of the blue. The language is beautiful...

i really liked this...it was beautiful

this is really good. nice work.