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| poppy nowis 2006-10-19 ch 1,  | abusei swear i reviewed this one! maybe only on msn...? hmm, anyway, it is so beautiful. i like the continuation of the sentences through the lines. i would say like that poem we're doing in english, except that i hate it, and i love this :) ooh btw, time for a new poem please |
| La Gitane 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseOhh, that's kind of achingly pretty. I love vibrations shaking her out of skyscapes, and the quiet, understated sentiment of the poem. Lovely. :) |
| Iris Early Has Brown Eyes 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful, sugar, just beautiful. I'm jealous :( but :D to you for a lovely poem. x |
| Christybell 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh this was sad.Its not about me is it?! because i was on... a train... and...okay, lets not be paranoid.I loves it though! "Backed against the sightless January sky" |