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| Seventh Chords 2006-11-03 ch 1,  | abuseVery heartfelt and beautifully-written piece. I feel just the same way sometimes, wishing I knew my grandfather a little better before he passed away. You brought the emotion out in this story very well, and that's great. Keep it up! |
| holadios 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, that is really deep. I love it, it is very sad...You did a really really good job of writing it too. Your writing made me feel the sorrow a little bit...great job and Im sorry for your loss. |