Reviews for You Broke my Heart When You Blew my House Down

sicklysnowwhite 2007-01-14 ch 1,	abusesome of the lines are a bit off because of the rythem, you might want to work on the beat. but i can tell you worked on the rhyming although some of it was a bit... iffy
capriciousguy 2006-11-28 ch 1,	abusei love it! hilarious! very nice rhyming and rythem and an amazing idea! great job!
Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-03 ch 1,	abuseLove the parody. "You broke my heart, When you blew my house down." Haha. Good poem.
Sakka-Fenikkusu 2006-10-23 ch 1,	abuseOkay... that's an... uhm... interesting take on the three little pigs... I didn't exactly get the parody. It was kind of funny, in a wolf-screwing-a-pig way. And yet... If I knew the parody it'd probably be funnier. >_>
An-Author-At-Heart 2006-10-09 ch 1,	abuseLOL wow i actually didn't recognize the parody while I was reading it... what a DITZ! anyway, it was funny and cute. and again, thanks so much for reviewing my stuff, especially my story. Seriously, I really appreciate it. :D
Kimi504 2006-10-01 ch 1,	abuseomg shakes head I don't know whether to laugh or what to that... lol omg one of the pigs had an affair with the wolf! omg