|Reviews for A Love Indescribable|
| Official Fictionpress Reviewer 4/3/08 . chapter 1
No wonder that kid broke up with you.
Dayum...I mean...gosh. You really honestly tried with this one din't you sweetie?...Well it didn't work.
The worst line in this "poem" (cough cough-If you can even call this crap that) is:
'Cause when I loose a wrestling match
I really kind of win.'
WTF? NO BITCH YOU LOSE! Not only did you lose my respect, your fan base, but any chance of a successful writing career.
Um..please do me a favor. Either take this shit down, re-write it, or stop writing in general.
Thanks hun :)
| sylvia's syndrome 10/1/06 . chapter 1
I enjoyed reading this piece. I think you did a nice job with the rhyme. It sounds natural and it flows well— two tasks that can be quite difficult to achieve. Keep up the good work!