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| nonaccount 2007-09-18 ch 5,  | abusePromoting sex or promoting safe sex? Have these people never heard of birth control? It sounds like John is equating having sex to getting pregnant, as though it is an inevitability. Ok, I'll stop complaining, I just have a problem with people not using protection. Otherwise, this is a cute series of intertwined oneshots. Sorry for the birth control hoopla. :) |
| i-see-faeries 2007-07-09 ch 15, | abuseAw, that was so cute. Sweet and fluff and all that good stuff. I love it. |
| lilylupin7 2007-01-06 ch 15, | abuseWonderful story. I kind of wish Emily could end up with someone...or maybe Jeremy can come back to life... |
| Guacamole 2007-01-06 ch 15, | abusei really like this story because of all the wacky and different characters in this story. i find it a very fun read. |
| sporkess 2007-01-05 ch 15, | abuseIt's me again, my dear! Just checking in to say a very loud YAY for the chapter with the hickeys, which was the sweetest and funniest little vignettey thing. I was less rabidly enthused by the most recent chapter, but yeah, also sweet. A great little series, and thank you kindly, sir, for sharing them with us. |
| The Intelligent Designer 2007-01-03 ch 14, | abuseOh, ths is so wonderful. It's cute/serious/sweet all at the same time. It's such an interesting story to tell. I'm very happy after reading this. In a...kind of messed up way. It's like you can believe in true love after this, like all of my cynicism went away. It's going on my favorites. |
| PricelessWhore 2007-01-02 ch 15, | abuseaw T_T... these lil stories were reallyy cute.. and funny and aw. just adorable. i noticed that the last two chapters from the others and im guessing that its because your wanting to write the old fasion way -smiles- nice jobe with this.. seriously |
| Roman Candles 2007-01-01 ch 15, | abuseThis was a great story. I would like to see a story that has Emily as the primary romantic target, though. I believe that she also deserves someone, despite all the pain that she has gone through. I'm sad to see the end, but I'm glad that the story ended well. |
| PricelessWhore 2006-12-31 ch 14, | abuseaw cutee. |
| sporkess 2006-12-29 ch 13, | abuse...It must be said. If Emily went to my school, I would be forced to kill her. Or the results would be ohgodsomessy. But then that's because my school has entire love polygons. Impressive ones, actually. And it's an all girls school, which makes it really very interesting... So. Apart from the fact that she's an incurable busybody, I think these vignettes are really cute. And I'll even suspend my sense of logic in the face of fluff and romance. Good job! |
| Avnas 2006-12-27 ch 13, anon. | abuseI'm addicted to this story. Its very well written and flows together perfectly. |
| Tasyin 2006-12-26 ch 13, | abuseKudos to you. I really like the involvement of a main character as an observer, it's such a cool style to write with and you're doing it brilliantly. The variations in style are great too, the livejournal thing was funny :P. The only thing you should watch is that occasionally you slip into more archaic english that seems a little weird. Only time it actually bothered me was the suicide note, which has an excuse for it anyway. But it still felt a little too constructed, too scripted to really be someone's last thoughts. It just didn't sound natural, if you know what I mean. You do it a few times throughout, but don't worry about it too much. Great story, keep it up, please. :) ~Tasyin |
| phelps112 2006-12-20 ch 12, | abuseaww... is there someone else out there for emily? and are there any more couples for her to help? |
| PricelessWhore 2006-12-18 ch 12, | abuseaw |
| PricelessWhore 2006-12-10 ch 11, | abuseyeaahh it wass well done.. got kindah mixed up in the begginin buh i caught on.. anyway cute. |