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| OneGirlAlone 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was so awesome! I loved it! Very cute. |
| Xygnus 2006-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story... I really like the way you captured the vivid internal thoughts of Max perfectly with that bitter yet comedic tone (maybe it's because I can sort of relate from previous personal experiences :p ), and the way that even the tiniest details of the characters' action are included to make this story truly come alive... Keep up the good work... |