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| Satan'z Myth 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThe story was really well written and I love the way you've put a lot of things. It's really believable, which is a rather uncommon thing on FP *winks* I would have liked a little background on the line "I almost laughed as I thought of how Ryan and Sandra had been convinced I was straight." I found Ryan to be so sweet...:) And the story had a classic ending! |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseLol. Loved the ending. Ha. With twenty-six girlfriends in the past year alone, I thought Sloane was straight also. I wonder how long he'd been crushing on Ryan then... Poor Sandra. I hope she eventually gets over Jake. Awesome story. :D I loved it. |
| Kailum 2007-03-22 ch 1, | abuseReally cute and good descriptions, but try to separate the different scenes a little better :P Lol sometimes I got a bit confused ^_^;; FP probably screwed it up somehow when you posted it... =/ I really liked the part when Sloane goes to Ryan at the park (the second time) |
| SanJ 2007-03-21 ch 1, anon. | abusea very cute story...the premise of this story has a lot of potential...why not make it into a full-fledged story instead of a one-shot? the end was good too. |
| MikeDustoff 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, this story was lovely. Wonderful points of view. |
| N Rawji 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abusei |