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Satan'z Myth
2008-07-03
ch 1,
abuseThe story was really well written and I love the way you've put a lot of things. It's really believable, which is a rather uncommon thing on FP *winks* I would have liked a little background on the line "I almost laughed as I thought of how Ryan and Sandra had been convinced I was straight." I found Ryan to be so sweet...:) And the story had a classic ending!
Rock on an Ocean Shore
2007-06-14
ch 1,
abuseLol. Loved the ending.

Ha. With twenty-six girlfriends in the past year alone, I thought Sloane was straight also. I wonder how long he'd been crushing on Ryan then...

Poor Sandra. I hope she eventually gets over Jake.

Awesome story. :D I loved it.
Kailum
2007-03-22
ch 1,
abuseReally cute and good descriptions, but try to separate the different scenes a little better :P Lol sometimes I got a bit confused ^_^;; FP probably screwed it up somehow when you posted it... =/

I really liked the part when Sloane goes to Ryan at the park (the second time)
SanJ
2007-03-21
ch 1, anon.
abusea very cute story...the premise of this story has a lot of potential...why not make it into a full-fledged story instead of a one-shot? the end was good too.
MikeDustoff
2006-12-13
ch 1,
abuseWow, this story was lovely. Wonderful points of view.
N Rawji
2006-10-01
ch 1,
abusei
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