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HelloLonely
2008-08-24
ch 14,
abuseOoh, the last part got me a little creeped out a bit. Does it have any significance despite the fact that Senya don't really like Eileen, as much as she think she does? And I wonder what it was that made Eileen in "deep **". Can't wait to read more :D
atollo
2008-08-22
ch 14,
abuseaw, poor Sen. Again, nice chapter, awesome story.
Anne
2008-08-21
ch 14, anon.
abuseI am hooked! I hope you update soon! The hottest guy in school is in like with an OCD! She is hilarious!
Mimi
2008-08-20
ch 14, anon.
abuseAwesome! :)
pinkfluffyoranges
2008-08-19
ch 14,
abusewow I remember starting this story a life time ago, I seriously thought it would have been finished by now. Senya has gotten quite violent these past few chapters, and the story in a whole has gotten dark. I'm still loving it, but it just doesn't seem to still hold that light and humorous feeling to it anymore. Also with all the past tense talk it put a dampener in the story because we know it's going to have a bitter end, so I'm hoping we'll get there soon.
sooner or later its over
2008-08-18
ch 14,
abuseah i would have pushed her off to! no no just kidding. but this story is nothing short of brillance! :)
sooner or later its over
2008-08-18
ch 1,
abusei really like your main character and your style good job :)
sunshinedoll
2008-08-11
ch 13,
abuseI may just cry now. Why isn't she with Finleigh?
They're such an adorable couple.

This is depressing.
You have to update soon and create a happy ending! They're perfect for each other.

...Or whatever you have in mind ;D
obsessivecompulsivehobbit
2008-08-01
ch 13, anon.
abuseHello again! Welcome back! Aww. The way you keep reminding that Sen is going to lose Finleigh, makes me think it's going to happen sooner rather then later, and it makes me rather sad. I can't wait to see what happens next though. Please update soon. Until then. =)
HelloLonely
2008-07-24
ch 13,
abuseNow I am officially depressed for two reasons: I have to wait for an update now; and the fact that Finleigh doesn't end up with Senya. Now I'm not all for happy endings but it's just that you only offer hints and tidbits, and it's driving me nuts that I don't know! Haha. But I loved this chapter. And from the looks of it, Senya has matured a lot, a lot wiser it seems. I wonder what happened..why they didn't stay together. It surely doesn't sound like a regular breakup. Update soon! :D

And I loved Senya's rambling in the last chapter, I think I forgot to mention that.
HelloLonely
2008-07-24
ch 12,
abuseNew reader here! And I am now officially in love with your story! Agh. I love Senya's character, with her OCD and her rambling, it's all really fun/interesting to read. Finleigh (he has the oddest name, but it makes the story all the more fun to read) is such a amazing character, haha. I love how he's unexpected, but sweet towards Senya all the same. There are so many secrets lingering around..and I'm getting really anxious to find out what everything will lead up to. Especially with Eileen and Davidson, as well as Senya's "present" thoughts.

I thought this paragraph was really powerful, even if we don't understand or know what really happened yet:

"For me now, these simple memories of us together are exactly what made our times together so wonderful. Simple and happy. And looking back on it now, I cannot help but let a few tears slip away from my eyes. They slide automatically down the bridge of my nose on to the tip of my chin. And soon enough, I will be crying out loud again and calling myself a fool and damning the old silly, innocent me for being so ridiculously a fool and end up waking up my roommate for it. In the silence of the night, I cannot help but remember the scent of him that lingers in my life.

Why did I let him go?"

Anyway, I'm basically just buying time right now because I really don't want to have to stop reading! Lol. :D
Kohlomere
2008-07-22
ch 13,
abuseI hear that these days it isn't lingerie men picture but whips. =P Bad joke, sorry!

Great work,
E.
Mimi
2008-07-22
ch 13, anon.
abuseI'm confused but intrigued. I wanna know what happened!! lol and man her character drives me insane but whatev, the story is awesome
deny.me.not
2008-07-21
ch 13,
abuseI just read up to this chapter all in one go, and I can honestly say my heart just breaks piece by piece after every segment in the chapter.

The lack of Finleigh at the end there is slightly, okay I lied, REALLY depressing. My heart just DIED at the last sentence, I think Senya is adorable. I love her OCD-ness, it's what makes her HER. I love Finleigh and Senya.

I look forward to your next update. =]

-dmn.
Lethe's Oblivion
2008-07-20
ch 13,
abuseAh! I just got back from Australia with People to People. Sorry. Your author's note excited me. The lack of Finleigh in future/present times is quite saddening, and I hope that the lack will change into an abundance at some point in the story, or perhaps in a sequel or something, and I certainly hope that he will re-belong to her. I'm very curious about all this hint-dropping that their little rendezvous will (seemingly) soon come to an end.
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