 Ratava100d 2009-08-05 . chapter 15this storys really good.
her dad should go to hell.
please update again soon ^^ |
 Lethargiclove NLI 2009-06-02 . chapter 15 Ah, I'm so glad to see that you've updated this story because it is by far one of my personal favorites. However, I can't say that I completely understood everything that occurred in this chapter, especially in the end. I don't know it the last scene occurred much after the previous one or what. I hope that the next chapter will clear things up. Things are grim between Fin and Senya. Oh, I soo hope for their happily ever after. I'll be completely crushed when they ultimately break up. Ah, I can barely express how I'm feeling after this chapter, haha. Until next time then! We'll see if I'm more articulate then. |
 rawritsrchl 2009-05-30 . chapter 15O my gosh,I'm so glad you started updating the story, I missed your writing so much! haha well, although the storyline is a bit confusing, I think I get the gist of what is happening. I hope you continue to update! |
 Dances-With-Pen 2009-05-30 . chapter 15I liked that. Seriously. It's been so long that I forgot your writing style. So deep and wonderful. |
 righthere431 2009-05-30 . chapter 15...Wow, that was a really great chapter! |
 pretitiful 2009-05-29 . chapter 15wow!
that was utterly amazing!
i love the way yu write and its so deep.
well done!
its good to read this story again :) |
 goodbyemylover 2009-05-29 . chapter 15This chapter, no lie, was so freaking amazing. It was written in a kind of different style than the other chapters but i love it so much!!
I'm a big fan of the repetitive words, and the "i'm so sorry" really hit hard. Which i'm assuming was what you were shooting for.
This was also incredibly sad, but in a really beautifully, heart breaking way.
PLEASE update again soon, I need to read more!! |
 righthere431 2009-04-18 . chapter 14Jealousy is an ugly thing... I know Finleigh wouldn't do anything with Eileen though. |
 righthere431 2009-04-18 . chapter 12aw he made a song for her and kissed her! =]] love this chapter! |
 righthere431 2009-04-18 . chapter 11Oh so does she like him? |
 righthere431 2009-04-18 . chapter 10Oh noo! I hope they don't get back together... |
 righthere431 2009-04-18 . chapter 9Even though this chapter was short, it was really sweet!! |
 righthere431 2009-04-18 . chapter 8What? Why is Finleigh ignoring her? And why is Erika doing it too? Maybe she saw them hugging each other or something. |
 righthere431 2009-04-18 . chapter 7Oh gosh, I hope that never happens again... lol "Why's there a friggin' handprint on my face?" hilarious. |
 righthere431 2009-04-18 . chapter 6Hehe I hope she buys a present for Finleigh. |