 pixiepoptartz 2008-06-20 . chapter 1this is great; i'm sure we all know what it's like being lied to.
"But the worst part about being lied to,
Is knowing that I wasn’t worth the truth." =love.
i also like the "blue wind rushes by," part because sometimes we feel so alone that even things like the wind can't stand to be in our presence, like they've got somewhere better to go.
that's just my interpretation. all in all, i definitely liked this. |
 candlekitty 2006-11-07 . chapter 1WOW. painful, and so real! i can connect with it alright. *biggrin* |
 freddy2fan 2006-10-28 . chapter 1I love this poem, it's beatiful. And I'm usually not a poem person.
Thanks for reviewing my stories, btw. |
 Jack Saucy 2006-10-09 . chapter 1whoah. great emotion here. very nice poem.
thanks for commenting my story! as for the stalker...his identity is to always remain a mystery. ;)
wonderful work! |
 holadios 2006-10-04 . chapter 1oh my gosh! That is soo truthful and soo good! I LOVE it! |
 x.Insanely Serene.x 2006-10-01 . chapter 1OMG!! I love it! The power & emotion it holds... the rain makes it perfect!!
Love ya lots,REn |