Reviews for Chariot Of Fire - FictionPress.com

persephones catharsis 2007-05-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat crude ** called life had put cyanide in my lemonade. ~awesome, i'm obsessed with analogies and personification, could you tell? lol keep it up
surrealphobia 2007-05-05 ch 1,	abuseHyacinthe, I swear you should write songs. These lines are so lyrical and beautiful. I also like the lines the the reviewer below me mentioned. Your writing style is harsh and it has tons of emotion. fav. chucks an Almond Joy Great work, Surreal
TheNewUnderground 2006-10-02 ch 1,	abuseoh dear. i love this. favorite line: "My words, my words, my crowing wicked birds,/to pluck out the heart he offered me and swallow it in thirds." amazing. i could go on and on about all the little things i love...keep writing stuff like this. even though it's not exactly the cheeriest thing i've ever read, it most definitely made my day.