O! That was a really good chapter. It surprised me at first that Clara said she was guilty. I didn't understand why she would do that. But then she proved herself obviously not guilty. I liked how during th trial, Liam was putting is own little puzzle together and figured it out. I have to say though...wow...in the end they put Jessica with Clara to watch her. Wow. That is going to obviously lead to something not good. I have no idea what, but from my experience with Hamlet and Shakespeare...someone will wind up hurt or even dead...and I can't wait to see it happen! I really liked this trial chapter. It was very interesting and well told. I'm very interested to see were it goes. It's not looking good for Clara though. *shakes head* Not at all. Anyway, another awesome/great job! :-)

Awesome chapter! So good! Okay...let's just get this out there...Jessica...is such a **! I mean...wow. She really needs some psychological help and should just calm down. lol. Plus, adding complications to Liam and Clara's relationship...nice! This chapter was highly entertaining. I thought it was very interesting that it was mostly from Liam's pov. Is it just me or was most of the rest of the story told from Clara's pov? If so it's a nice little change to see Liam's perspective, if not...well then I'm just crazy...lol. I really liked the flow of this chapter as well as the idea of framing and somewhat hurting Clara. I also liked the quoting of Hamlet...that really adds to the story. The only thing I don't understand is the honor trial thing at the end. I mean, it is a college...so having a trial just seems weird. It makes sense, but at the same time...it doesn't. Anyway, I'm really liking it and am ready to read the next chapter. Yay! Again, awesome job!

*is trying to be a good kyra*

you're mirroring the characters and tehir roles very well i think, especially john and james as ros and guild. They always did skeeve me off...too bloody co-ordinated...it carries over very well here. The whole thing with Jessica also fits. She's quite the evil **. glad you've got your mojo back ^.^

(I promise not to steal it until next friday at the earliest, i swear!)

Ah, a twist. That Liam turned out not to be so honest as believed in the previous scene. Though he did admit his intentions and told the truth. I have somewhat mixed feelings about the character now. I really felt the tension from Clara. I think you managed to show that well in many of the scenes, particularly this one.

I love how you transformed Liam into a caring "prince" despite Clara's initial judgment of him. I do get a hint of love in the air with this scene.

Oh conflict! This is getting interesting. I like how you brought in the warning from JayCee not to get ensnared and not to mix a play with reality. Foreshadowing perhaps? Nice lead in to the conflict. Her role in the play begins to affect her real life.

I love the way this scene headed. That Riley is a good friend. I liked the way she made Clara get on the stage, hahah. Poor Clara...though it did pay off. I did notice a few spelling errors, but nothing too major. I would have pointed them out...but I got so drawn into the story that I read through to the last scene.

I really liked how it began. I did get a bit confused with the introduction of JayCee and Riley, however. At first I thought JayCee was the roommate. Otherwise, the story really pulled me into it. I did notice one possible error around the 5th paragraph down, "They arrived at the entrance of the library. “This is my stop. >I’ll you tomorrow

Aweseome! That was such a good chapter! It's so nice to read more of this story after so long. I've missed it. The setup for Liam and Clara's relationship is going very well. I'm really liking that. But wow...Jessica is crazy. It's kind of weird because someone very close to me is named Jessica and she's a total sweetheart and wouldn't ever be this evil, but when dealing with literature...Jessica is one of those names that could be used for evil or bitchy women, so it works. I love the last line of the chapter. It's the best part. "Why get your own hands dirty when there was someone you could easily sacrifice to do it for you?" Such an awesome line, and so true! lol. Great job on this chapter. It seems to be getting more intense. I can't wait to see where it goes and what happens. Update as soon as you can. I know school is crazy for both of us, so I can understand and wait...but still...update when you can. Great job!

Wow. That was really good. I think out of all the chapters so far, along with I think the one with the blonde psycho chick...it feels like your kind of stories. I really liked the whole dream thing and then how it ended with the dream becoming a kind of reality. Plus I loved the description of her when she was acting and slowly becoming dizzier and everything. I thought that was a great part. But wow. I definitely loved this chapter and now am very curious to see what happens next. With a couple of the other chapters...I never obviously knew what was going to happen next...but I had a feeling...and now with what's going on with the dream and everything...I'm not too sure anymore. Anyway, i'm very very curious to see where this goes next. I want to see the next chap very soon or basically as soon as you can. ;-) Again, awesome job! Can't wait to see what happens next!

I really like this one. I noticed a few spelling mistakes throughout the chapters, but it was nothing very bothersome. Overall, the story is wonderful and I look forward to reading more.

~ Luna
(BloodyDisaster on EA forum)

Awe! How sweet! I'm really liking this. I figured that Liam didn't invite anyone else, but it was still very sweet. I'm really liking Liam right now. And wow! I never really thought of how many different Hamlet movies there are. I mean there are still the Ethan Hawke one (which is cool cause it's modern day...but other then Ethan and Liev Schrieber...is very disappointing) and the 5 hr Kenneth Branagh and Kate Winslet one (my fav so far). I really want to see the Helena Bonham Carter one though. I seriously love her. I'm just afraid how Mel Gibson is in the part of Hamlet...it just doesn't seem like it would fit...Anywhoozle. Another great job! I really liked this chapter. It was very sweet and I really enjoyed it. Update as soon as you can...I want to see what happens next! Yay! Wooho...and all that jazz!

I really liked this chapter! I liked the whole setting up of Liam's character a bit more. Showing that he is basically or at least seems to be a normal kind of guy that isn't really into his fame. I also really liked the character descriptions of Ophelia and Hamlet, though I didn't agree with everything that was said about Hamelt...they still were good descriptions for those that read this story who have yet to read Hamlet. But yeah...something is definitely happening with Liam and Clara. I do have to say though...this line: “You obviously didn’t see Sweeney Todd. Blondes are capable of a lot when in large groups.” Best line! I literally laughed out loud...and scared the others in the room with me. Anyway, awesome chap. I really really liked it. Now on to the next chap! Yay!

Nice chapter. I was a little suprised. It seemed a bit shorter than your other chapters. But still good. I definitely think something major is going to happen though. I mean, this JayCee character has warned Clara to not lose herself in the play...which obviously means she's going to, Clara doen't really like Liam...which obviously means that's going to change, and this blonde chick (who is just plain scary...lol) well needs to just take a chill pill but gave Clara a warning to stay away from Liam or else...which obviously means that something is going to happen...BUT WHAT? So exciting! I'm also sure that you'll have plenty stuff that I won't see comeing, since that happens with all of your stories. Anyway, another great chapter. And I am on to the next. I wonder what happens next!

Again -glares- you need spell check. Hehe

but anyway, I absolutely love your turn of phrase in these two chapters. I want to wear excitement like a coat! I'll bet it's warm... and red! Err... my point is that I think this is a great beginning to your story and I like the dialogue/exchange between your characters.

(^-^)