i love how you say to the... thats pretty cool... i also like the repition of how you dont want him... it seems like youre reassuring yourself.. well done

Oh, wow! This is brilliant! I love the way you weave all these things together, and the lines 'Spice substitutes my sweet tooth /Behind my shallow rapid past' are simply stunning; but, then, they all are. This is really beautiful and incredibly well done!