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neongoldtooth
2007-08-26
ch 1,
abuseOh it was amazing!I usually hate
angst, but this was seriously great.
Aw, i wish Farrin would just admit that he loves Daniel.
you ned a sequal with some lovin.

=]
Rock on an Ocean Shore
2007-06-25
ch 1,
abuseD: Wow. That's the saddest thing.

You've got so much emotion in this story. And so much psychological stuff going on. Especially in explaining why Farrin doesn't want to be "like that," and why he hurts Daniel.

Great story. I'm favoriting it. :)
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