scottie, thank you for all the kind words; i really appreciate your consistent reviews, and i'm glad you enjoy my work. i can only hope that as i diverge from my initial "theme" and expand my reach, you will continue to be supportive.

-michael hoblak

For fear of sounding like a broken record, I will just say that you have done another magnificant job here, Michael. I have noticed a 'constant theme' running through last few poems you've released and she seems to be very beautiful. If she doesn't appreciate all the lovely words you dedicate to her, then someone needs to slap her upside the head.(Then again I could be reading way, way too much into all of this, in which case just ignore me and chalk it up to crazy old people ramblings.) Keep blessing us with your amazing talent(and you never-ceasing ability to make old ladies blush.) ~~Scottie

cute, that "fin" at the end ;-) No, serious: this is one amazing poem! The rhyming isn't obvious and not irritating as it sometimes can be. It just fits here. Keep on going!

ah. omg that was amazing i loved it! REALLY REALLY REALLY NICE JOB!