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| chipmunks love squirrels 2008-05-29 ch 1,  | abuselove it! great job |
| Abby Sequioa 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseaw, I like it! exspecially "live like it's your dying day" *hugs* |
| SirenThird 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseThat's just lovely. I love that the whole poem can fall back onto the title and just be complete.The line "Nuture a growing Friendship" almost seems out of place here.I really did like this though, an excellent read.~Tobleh |
| Lemon Sorbet 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseI'm normally a fan of more complicated poetry, but I liked this. It's short and simple but you get your message across clearly. Keep it up! Lucyx |