hmm.
i really like the descriptions and images. but it seems like ive read the relationships already in another ella story.

lovely tho, as usual.

hm, i love the choppy but poetic feel of this. most definitely. i like short chapters too, even if they end too fast, but it's your story and i won't make demands only that i do hope you continue so i might read more which i surely will.

best of wishes.

i love this story. it's so poetic and not...scripted. it's such a vacation from the stuff i usually read, so good job! :)

-- i.am.the.winter

beautiful as always. more please!!

ususally im to lazy to read long stories, but urs are amazing...
-BENY BEN BORIS BENTION

This is really pretty! I love the descriptions of the club, and the way calls pippa 'little moon.' Keep writing!

Love, Tea

not sure where you're gonna go with it but i like it

oh ella. it's beautiful as always. i miss your updates. more please!!