This was very well-written. The words used to describe the lifelessness of the corpses of your loved ones were chosen well.

I have to say, I don't have nightmares about death very often, or dreams of death very much. Only once in a while. But I know what you mean--it's so horrible to dream that those you love are dead, but so relieving to find that they are still alive.

Very descriptive. As one plagued by continuing nightmares since early childhood, the imagery is particularly intense. Well written little snippet.

Disappear is spelled incorrectly: might want to fix that one.

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