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| SilentWillow920 2007-03-08 ch 1, | I loved your metaphorical portrayal of this conflict. For one of the first I've seen of your works that incorporate a rhyme scheme, you did very well. You may want to work on your rhythm a little bit more, but that takes a lot of practice anyway. All in all, good work. :) |
| Jhureina 2006-10-02 ch 1, | I like this one even more than Hero's Quest. I already told how much I liked this and why, I'm just posting this so it looks like you're really popular. :PAnd you never review for me, wtf? If you don't write at least one nice thing about my work, I'm going to start slandering yours! ;)See you around! |
| aliasfan 2006-10-02 ch 1, | Wow, I LOVE this poem! You just seem to be getting better and better at writing! How's Forsaken going and everything? I miss reading it! Do you know if you can make it into a book? Anyways, this poem was really inspiring. "Though the day is won, My personal war is not yet done." Those lines are so true. Keep it up! ::adds to favs:: |