Very nice. Surprising how painful other people can be to someone huh...Not belonging, or so they feel. Anyway, excellent poem. Love the ending, leaves the reader feeling the overall poem in one word.

Kind of dramatic for a first day of school, hm? I still like it. Keep writing. Is there a rhyme scheme for this? I didn't catch it. Maybe it's just me. Keep writing. this is ,Susannah

I love this and I feel for you...