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| mizu no kokoro 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abusesometimes i feel the same on several aspects, but other times, knowing your own weakness should make you stronger? up to the individual i suppose. nicely done keep writing |
| inpsycho 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abusehey, loved it. it's really deep eh, and oh so true |
| sunday night sky 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abusevery angsty, bitter, biting. i love it. great formatting, well worded. i can relate. beautiful parenthesis. meaningful. good job. |
| Arf106 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is deep... Yes society tells us how we should look what we should wear, it defines what supposed to be "cool" or "in". And of course you're worth more! Everyone has a choice on what they can become and who they make themselves, do not give in, be yourself, stand out, be unique! Okay, you did convey your message to the reader excellently, and also conveyed emotion too, very good write! ^.^~Arf~ |