That was such an honest - not the too-deep, cryptic, cynical honesty, but plain truth, that was gently coated in a positive aura. Did that sound too new-agey and spacey? I don't mean to sound poseur-ish but I'm not sure how else to describe it... Anyway, great poem!

In class today we actually were reading a John Keats poem called bright star and it really connects to this. I suggest you read it! Strangely enough he shows in the poem how and why he wishes the world did not change. It is human nature to want to preserve the best momement of youre life forever.

I love this poem because its the polar opposite! I find it a cool coincidence you also use imagery of stars and the moon to communicate youre ideas like Keats. This was a really uplifting poem with some great images! I love the fresh new look on this topic!

I moved about a year ago, and yes, change is my middle name...haha...wow, review luck "hit you ** the **" as one of my reviewers once said to me...haha, you seem really nice and I like this poem. The form of it reminds me of these poems we used to write in English (you know, the ones that only have a third of your heart in them?) that are calles something special.

I think that the swaying of it must represent how everything in the world gives way to something else, like when grass is cut and grows back, and people die and more are born. You must have known this even before the poem was written but I type while I think so I have to get it out there or it's gone. Haha...I know, I'm different huh?

Anyways, I have two minutes left so here's my review, I hope you like it. Maybe you can stop by my account sometime and browse through. Who knows, maybe you'll see something you like?

Thanks for your time!

Gaki

Lovely. Refreshingly positive!

"The brightest light casts the darkest shadow." This idea from Star Wars, of all places, is neatly summed up in the first stanza of the poem.

Change from light to darkness is a part of every day, also captured by your poem.

A nice piece of writting: keep up the good work!

phantom_jedi

Lovely poem. The authors note is just as inspiring! Great! Keep sharing your amazing work!

~Anna~ ^_^