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Vesta J 2007-07-12 . chapter 1
agh! i know the feeling...
nice wording, and excellent support for your metaphor( what the hell i sound like an english teacher), even though it's not exactly happy. still. good work.
-vesta
Clandestiny 2007-04-20 . chapter 1
I remember this poem...mine was about a radio. Yours is much much better.
Sweetly Sarcastic 2006-10-03 . chapter 1
i like it- it really retells the addage of being treated like trash. very interesting, and in a cool way
Jeex 2006-10-03 . chapter 1
I.too.wonderr.what.your.teacherr.said.

that.was.the.besst metephorr EVER!

I.reaallyy.like. this.
Moth Reedfly 2006-10-02 . chapter 1
I wonder how your teacher reacted about this..:P Good job with the metaphors. I like the sadness in it and its simplicity. keep it up!
Orual 2006-10-02 . chapter 1
Very nice illustration, though it's sad. It sucks to have people constantly dumping their problems on you.
Princess-anna57 2006-10-02 . chapter 1
Ohh wow! This is great! Amazing work. Keep it up!

~Anna~ ^_^
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