 Vesta J 2007-07-12 . chapter 1agh! i know the feeling...
nice wording, and excellent support for your metaphor( what the hell i sound like an english teacher), even though it's not exactly happy. still. good work.
-vesta |
 Clandestiny 2007-04-20 . chapter 1I remember this poem...mine was about a radio. Yours is much much better. |
 Sweetly Sarcastic 2006-10-03 . chapter 1i like it- it really retells the addage of being treated like trash. very interesting, and in a cool way |
 Jeex 2006-10-03 . chapter 1I.too.wonderr.what.your.teacherr.said.
that.was.the.besst metephorr EVER!
I.reaallyy.like. this. |
 Moth Reedfly 2006-10-02 . chapter 1I wonder how your teacher reacted about this..:P Good job with the metaphors. I like the sadness in it and its simplicity. keep it up! |
 Orual 2006-10-02 . chapter 1Very nice illustration, though it's sad. It sucks to have people constantly dumping their problems on you. |
 Princess-anna57 2006-10-02 . chapter 1Ohh wow! This is great! Amazing work. Keep it up!
~Anna~ ^_^ |