okay i'm aware this is the third poem i'm reviewing, but i can't help it. your technique is so flawless, everything i've read i've liked. you have such a talent, never stop writing, please

hm... i love the way you write. its intoxitgating (did i spell that rite?)

Interesting poem. It does have a very scientific feel to it, with the use of words like "computes" and "vector." I'm not quite sure if I completely understand it, but I can be dense about things like this. Keep writing! :)