**. this whole poem was filled with the most beautiful words the most beautiful descriptions lines stanzas everyything that i have ever read. im just... shocked, stunned, amazed, lovin it. (haha mcdonalds). . . seriously tho, this is so amazing. if fictionpress hadnt turned into such a bastard and not let me add more faves i would add this a million times over. because its ** amazin... im gonna leave a lil special note on my profile for this poem cos i seriously love it. its amazin.

Awesome. I love this. The descriptions and imagery are so intense in my mind. It is very straight forward, no sugar coating like a lot of poets tend to do. Very nicely written, I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Gorgeous imagery and, uh, yeah. Just love.

~* Noelle