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| Emme Denney 2008-06-16 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice and true!! I like it. |
| upsidedown.underwater 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abusethat was really good, and so true! climbing a downwards ladder. was my favorite line, i loved it! |
| Morte d'Amour 2006-11-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is great! As I was reading, the bold lines acted as background echoes, and I loved it. True true. You explained life as it really is; an unfair game in which you work your ** off...but in the end may still lose. You basically stripped out all illusions we create in life, and it made the meaning all the more dark and somewhat depressing. Anyways, great job! |