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| Surmising Notations 2006-10-02 ch 1,  | abuseVery beautiful descriptions. No real plot to speak of, just a day in the life of, but what there is seems to be well done. In the second paragraph, first sentence, think peoples should show possession as people's as people is already pural and the sentence indicates the words by the people. |
| YourRedDoor 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseOnce again i am reviewing my own story. well anyway that's one review for me! -SpiritualEarthBird |