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ThETrutHAbouTCaseY
2006-10-03
ch 1,
abusegood poem. rememeber, poetry is read from comma to comma, period to period, etc. without these marks, there isn't a pause. Try aiming more for emotion that words. still, keep up the writing.
Leaving Here
2006-10-03
ch 1,
abuseaw! i love it. very true!

keep writing.

Liz
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