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| ThETrutHAbouTCaseY 2006-10-03 ch 1,  | abusegood poem. rememeber, poetry is read from comma to comma, period to period, etc. without these marks, there isn't a pause. Try aiming more for emotion that words. still, keep up the writing. |
| Leaving Here 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseaw! i love it. very true! keep writing. Liz |