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Reviews For: Sunborn Hopeless
Michael Burlando 2006-12-22 . chapter 1
Wow, I really am impressed. (and this is really a kindof über review) YOu've managed to make all of these stories into something, that even when it shouldnt be, is believable. You managed to create with a few key strokes practically everything from revenge to twisted fairy tales to worlds of imagination. But through it all they come of as believable, thoughtprovoking, and above all, stories of life, stories of humans, not of what can be squeezed through the censors, but trully of things that have almost certainly happened and will almost certainly happen again to one extent or another. ahem Die waren geile Lituratur!
Keep writing and posting stories that make people think twice, read thrice and then keep thinking about them for days on end.
thementalmeow 2006-10-11 . chapter 1
I don't know if this is because I'm tired but I think I missed the point. I want to say I miss you too but um I'm not sure if thats what you're reffering to. I do really love the imagery, and the words you used too :) it sounds fantastic, it's just going to take some brewing over to figure it out for what you truely mean.
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