That was so fabulous! HOMG! I'm like high on this fic. Okay, I'm not sure if this is finished or not, I think it may be but I'll alert it anyway.

This was a really good story i am really happy I found it. I just kept waiting for him to die like the half hearted ghost. I am really glad he survived it.

This one's beautiful. I'm not exactly comfortable with sexual scenes in general, but that's just me. I love the ending though, and Alex's feelings were perfectly brought out while still keeping the story in focus.

It's hard to believe, though, that two people can fall in love so quickly. I dunno, maybe it can happen, but I don't think it happens often enough. I'm a cynic when it comes to love, so sue me. But other than this somewhat unrealistic part, I loved the story.

Great work. Can't say I've read better in this area. :)

(PS: If you're wondering why I put this on Story Alert, please read my profile. First paragraph.)

this is so beautiful. Uhm. I have no eloquence right now, as I am feeling rather braindead, but suffice it to say that I love the dynmaics of the character interactions - and I love how it's the man who calls him Ghost who makes him feel alive. They seem like they would look so pretty together **beams** all pale and then darkness, scars and tattoos... they'd make such a pretty picture... **dreamy face**

I feel bad for Chris. Well, no, I don't. But I should. I just like Ghost and Chaime together too much to care. **laughs**

mucho hearts for this story. Warm and fuzzy feelings abound.

I love it. It was so beautiful. It was was really well-written. I don't know how else I can praise it.

*Flail*

Christ - that's 25 minutes of my life well bloody spent. Once again, you show a really good grip of Christian metphor and imagery - the poems seem a little like hymns too. Nice.

The characters are all nicely rounded - Chaime and Alex are given the depth they deserve, but then again, the other characters have their own depths, involved in the story, but not unneccecarilly (arg, spelling...) complicated.

Alex in particular really is the pathos-** of this tale, so many things turn against him, it makes the retribution all the more gratifying.

And yes, the sex...thank God!

Overall, very nice - although you do keep hanging on to one or two cliche's, blood, dark-skined Semes and naive Ukes. Not that there's anything terrible, but it'd pay off if you mixed up the boudaries a little.

This is a phenomenol story! I really loved the characters!

i love it. a lot. every single minute. you're an amazing writer, and holy crap...just, yeah.