Wow, it was much longer than I expected. I thought the original version was enough, but after reading your additions, this was good too. There is more anticipation on what will happen next.
Also midway, just something small, you wrote Ut-oh, did you mean Uh-oh?

Wha?! I love you story. It's addicting and has totally distracted me from a lot of homework. Hahaha

Haha. He went to her house...AGAIN.
Lmao. And she's the only one home as well. What a stalker. Haha.
I so cant wait for the next chapter.

OMG I love this chapter so much really funny and cute and can't wait to see whats going to happen next =D

Hehe. Will there be kissing or sex between Rose/Becka and Mr Fields in later chapters?
Coz i hope so. Haha

Yes, this one was funny. I like all the pet names.

Ok, so after reading the first three chapters, you are right, it does seem a little lighter and cuter and I like it. I'm enjoying this new version.

Awesome chapter and the dream was not bad it was good. and Bekah is in trouble lol can't wait till next chapter

Turn left at the next right. Haha.
Is the story finished?

Is/was Kristen her brother/sister?

i've just read this story.The eloquence of how u used words with such honesty of the feelings that Bekah is going through,hooked me to this story.Hope u will update it soon.You wrote beautifully,btw.

OMG I was completely into the story and then-bam you cut me off. Just kidding, but i do hope you update soon. :)

Dude, I love this story. Everyone in it is so freaking cute lol =) I love Dan. But could you please make your chapters a bit more longer.. and possibly update soon because I hate wiating for the next chapter to come lol. Oh and I have a question, did Kristen kill herself? I'm guessing so. It's just that I got confused with thinking that some neighbor did it but then that didn't seem right so yeah. LOVE THE STORY THOUGH! SO CUTE!

Oh, I like this I not so keen on the religious side to this, but then I suppose thats probablypart of the story?

Hey. Me again. I just read your latest note and, while i have no problem with your editing and re-posting coz i'll read anything Dan/Bekah related, i have a question. Did i read this version? Coz i can't remember which i read first. Actually, maybe i DIDN'T read this one, coz i remember you saying somewhere that people who were new to Dan/Bekah should avoid the original...which would be this one? Was it very different from the rewrite? Why did you rewrite it in the first place?