Nice chapter :)

Aww amazing chapter :D I really liked it, however sad it was :(

Awww that was so cute :) You were right! I loved this one!

Her books pressed tightly against her aching breasts...
hi lol, just wondering, why is her boobs aching out of a sudden?

Yay! I'm so glad you're back! I love Bekah's personality! Kind of reminds me of me a little bit :)

Amazing chapter :) I liked it!

:) cant wait for your the upcoming revised chapters !

i like this story! :) I want more chapters please!

Hello again. Wonderful chapter. I love the dimension to your story. I can't wait for the inevitable to happen. And I was right about Bekah losing her sibling. I didn't suspect Fields' tradgey. I did, however, like his essay/story... whatever it was. I found myself laughing at a few parts, cool, cool.

It was a delightful read, as always. Until my next review, bid you adieu.

The story Rebekah wrote seemed funny, managed to keep Fields' attention. 'Course I wonder if he honestly liked the story or if he is just really likes her.

I like how you started the story with her not really wanting to like him, but she steadily starts to-wants to, even. I'm just waiting for the moment that she and him actually do something that violates school policy.

The narrative is nice, full of resentment and teenage angst. She lost something, understandably she does the whole drinking think. I forgot to comment about that review, though I would do it now.

Until my next review, I bid you adieu.

I enjoy your dialogue very much so. I like the slow progression to your characterization. One of my favorite parts was: "Drown the memories, drown the sadness. Amen." Now, I can't rightly say why I liked that as much as I do, but good work. I am actually thinking of postponing my plans for a while and continue reading this story. I cannot fathom as to why I am so fascinated by it. ...I'm suppose to be talkin' abot the story... Sorry.

Back to the story, then. I have a few ideas why Fields is having her do these preposterous assignments, but I'm still my tongue until a later time. Until my next review, I bid you adieu.

I like this so far. Though, I haven't much to comment on, I'm sure that will change as I continue reading. If your re-write is better than this version, I will donate all my spare time-save for time that I use to write-to read all the posting of it. Keep writing, you're good.

Until my next review, I bid you adieu.

Great :)

are you even gonna finish it?

I read this story before and I loved it!