|Reviews for The Rose and the Thorn, Original version|
| pbgurl 2/19/10 . chapter 13
"Eat that bar? she thought as she fiddled with the wrapping. She'd rather encase it in glass and keep it forever."
LOL, that line cracked me up.
| GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees 2/18/10 . chapter 11
It seems a bit rushed, but I'm not minding it. XP -sigh- Her pride's getting to herr... w
| GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees 2/18/10 . chapter 10
She may think she's not a child, but they way she's acting is certainly childish. Surely, if you go to vodka for comfort, isn't that a bit immature on her part? Oh well. I love the story so far!
| pbgurl 2/18/10 . chapter 12
HAHAHA! I'm really enjoying Bekah's tough attitude, especially when she shot down Brian. _
| YoshiSmile 2/18/10 . chapter 1
Wow, this was really good. I loved the part where she say's "Geez, why couldn't they bring in a young teacher for that subject?" xDD You're hilarious! Keep up the good work w
| pbgurl 2/17/10 . chapter 11
LOL! I LOVED Dan's reactions! It cracked me up. _
Bekah's inner thoughts are hilarious sometimes, especially at the end of the chapter, lol!
| xoxhp 2/17/10 . chapter 11
DAMN I LOVED IT!
| n.p-simmons 1/18/10 . chapter 2
I like it, but not as much as the alternate version, which I'll admit, may be an unfair judgement as it has only just started where this one is completed... I'll be able to tell better if you decide to continue with the other one.*hint hint*
But what I do know is that I like Dan's characterisation better in 'Kiss From A Rose' because he's acting closer to his age than usual.
I do have a question though: why is Dan a history teacher in this version, whereas he is an enlgish teacher in most other versions?
| Amy 1/11/10 . chapter 9
I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely LOVE your story. I read all of what you have in less than a day, and I just can NOT wati to see what happens next, so I hope that you update soon! You're doing a great job!
| Winter's Tale 12/4/09 . chapter 9
...I need more...!
Your story is very addicting and I hope to see a new chapter up soon. :)
| Lady R 11/17/09 . chapter 9
Wow, it was much longer than I expected. I thought the original version was enough, but after reading your additions, this was good too. There is more anticipation on what will happen next.
Also midway, just something small, you wrote Ut-oh, did you mean Uh-oh?
| Allie R 11/16/09 . chapter 9
Wha? I love you story. It's addicting and has totally distracted me from a lot of homework. Hahaha
| CaitlinEA 11/16/09 . chapter 9
Haha. He went to her house...AGAIN.
Lmao. And she's the only one home as well. What a stalker. Haha.
I so cant wait for the next chapter.
| jobrogirl1995 11/16/09 . chapter 9
OMG I love this chapter so much really funny and cute and can't wait to see whats going to happen next D
| CaitlinEA 11/14/09 . chapter 8
Hehe. Will there be kissing or sex between Rose/Becka and Mr Fields in later chapters?
Coz i hope so. Haha