Yes, this one was funny. I like all the pet names.

Ok, so after reading the first three chapters, you are right, it does seem a little lighter and cuter and I like it. I'm enjoying this new version.

Awesome chapter and the dream was not bad it was good. and Bekah is in trouble lol can't wait till next chapter

Turn left at the next right. Haha.

Is the story finished?

Is/was Kristen her brother/sister?

i've just read this eloquence of how u used words with such honesty of the feelings that Bekah is going through,hooked me to this u will update it wrote beautifully,btw.

OMG I was completely into the story and then-bam you cut me off. Just kidding, but i do hope you update soon. :)

Dude, I love this story. Everyone in it is so freaking cute lol ) I love Dan. But could you please make your chapters a bit more longer.. and possibly update soon because I hate wiating for the next chapter to come lol. Oh and I have a question, did Kristen kill herself? I'm guessing so. It's just that I got confused with thinking that some neighbor did it but then that didn't seem right so yeah. LOVE THE STORY THOUGH! SO CUTE!

Oh, I like this I not so keen on the religious side to this, but then I suppose thats probablypart of the story?

Hey. Me again. I just read your latest note and, while i have no problem with your editing and re-posting coz i'll read anything Dan/Bekah related, i have a question. Did i read this version? Coz i can't remember which i read first. Actually, maybe i DIDN'T read this one, coz i remember you saying somewhere that people who were new to Dan/Bekah should avoid the original...which would be this one? Was it very different from the rewrite? Why did you rewrite it in the first place?

UGH. i guess i see where you're coming from, but i'm really disappointed cos i actually just wanted to reread a good story from my favorites list and the rose and the thorn was at the top of my list. it's a shame i can't just reread it...

I just tried to read this story, not to be redundant, and it seemed very interesting.

I'm disappointed that I can't continue reading it. However.. well.. What to say... It's nice that you care about what you've written and how it affects others and you.

gah! wat do u mean u aren't going to put the rest of the chapter up? . . . meep

I am so sorry to hear all of this. Especially since you were my favorite author here. You have a true gift. I already told you once before that these stories could be published.

I respect your desicion to delete these and redo them to fit your faith, but I must tell you, they were quite innocent and discreet and censored. It was very respectable compared to how lots of people would've written this story, myself included.

It is my belief that your faith shaped your talent. And if you don't already know, look at the amount of reviews you have. That is a catastrophic amount of reviews. You have support from me, and I'm sure you have support from many others.

I can't be as selfish and say that I want you to ditch everything and keep writing for the sake of me and many other readers, even though I want to. :) Your stories are one in a million, No matter how long I come here, I don't think I'll be able to find a story of your amazing caliber.

I wish you luck with your life.

-Kitty

While I am disappointed, like, seriously, it's really cool you deleted the chapters based on your faith. That's awesome. And a good reason to have, if any.

So. Rock on. :D