one word, WOW

"Pick me up, then drop me lower,

Lose me faster, kill me slower."

and



"Kiss me gently, and then stronger,

Touch me softly, and then harder."

Are really catchy. Great job, I really like the way everything flowed.

This is the first of your stories I read (I came back to review) and I have to say I enjoyed every story I read. I love the imagery you present in your stories as well as the meaning you twist into every story. I'm not sure that makes sense -.- but that's the best I can explain it.

Wow, simply amazing.